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1/12/22, 3:35 AM
Yeah, gonna love spending time reading this one

Tight Stories
1/12/22, 4:25 AM
@S1lv3r Oh bro! Proper glad to hear it mate!
1/12/22, 2:51 AM
This is such a fantastic series! I am really excited to read more!
Anonymous
1/11/22, 8:39 PM
absolutely loved this one, such a hot and sweet fairy tale!

1/11/22, 10:31 PM
@Anonymous I'm so glad to hear it and appreciate you taking the time to say so! Comments are author fuel ✨!
Martin
1/11/22, 9:16 PM
@darkfantasy It's difficult to judge this story in such an early stage. The premise is certainly interesting. Remember: The readers usually want to read this to get off, we're all peeping toms turned on by whatever weird and kinky fantasies you put your characters through. So, I'm curious what you're going to come up with in your further chapters!
1/11/22, 10:28 AM
Did you read a lot of the Myth Adventures books by Robert Aspirin? I love so much in both of the stories in this series, Unfortunately, this one ends with the sense that you still had much you wanted to explore, but thought you had let it go on for too long leaving so much fruit on the vine. I actually wish you had let this chapter end at Spurling's Folly and picked up with the same intensity the next part of the quest in a part 3. I also kept thinking this need to be developed into comic like Myth Adventures or Elf Quest.

1/11/22, 12:10 PM
Hey @scudder ! I totally grew up with battered paperback copies of Another Fine Myth and other entries into that series in the house, and I'm flattered by the comparison! I love those books. I guess poor Chance has become Gleep in this situation, motivated by sex rather than food ^^. Thank you for the comment! I totally hear you -- I've been aiming to write and share these past few years to get some perspective on my work, so this is very helpful. I hope to one day rework the series, and I definitely think I could stand to stick with and detail the later parts of the story if that happens! Comments like this are what make me want to. Much appreciated!
1/11/22, 4:35 AM
I love this. You really know how to write ABDL content.
1/11/22, 2:35 AM
Hey, it's been a couple of weeks since this story was published, and I'm still waiting on my next shipment of cakes! I don't want to push to hard, Author, but this story is too fucking good to be ignored.

SC Walker
1/11/22, 2:43 AM
Hey, thank you! I appreciate the enthusiasm. I definitely plan on continuing this story, but right now my priority is writing the reboot to my JPS series. Don't worry though, I WILL finish Chapter 2 of Donkey Cakes, it's 80% done. Also FYI the story was originally written almost a year ago and I only just published it to GSS recently. @Jack
naturallyInconsistent
1/10/22, 11:47 PM
Lidocaine works very well on me too and I'm also a caged sub. This story is so original and hot; Imma gonna try some of that!
Thomas97
1/6/22, 7:07 AM
it's a good start, although I would have preferred to get more information of this facility. so you could have started way before boy is captured and he could remember his escape from this institute, his background etc. then you could describe his capture and finally add your part here. nevertheless I like your writing. bondage is described well. maybe this dialogue between driver and officer is way to long for me and don't proceed story well. I would like to get more insight from victims point of view I'm looking forward to part 2:)

1/6/22, 9:00 AM
Thank you for the suggestions, I have provided some basic information about the facility. I believe this will solve some unnecessary confusion that readers have. Meanwhile, I realize there are format problems in dialogue that make it unpleasant to read. I tried to separate the dialogue to make it looks cleaner. I'm working on this series and I hope the next chapter will be better and legitimate officer's behavior in this chapter. @Thomas97

naturallyInconsistent
1/10/22, 11:13 PM
@darkfantasy The story is a bit short and ended abruptly. Looking forward to more. You could do a lot with this. You could enslave the nosy guy. You could have a officer's backstory. You could have the escapee's backstory. You could branch it many ways out. Excite us!