Recent Comments

Morbius Dunkey
5/6/24, 11:16 PM
I just read the entire story so far. The truth is that I liked it a lot, everything is very well thought out and now it is one of my favorite erotic sagas with the best script. I love the control that Jhon has over the father and son and the things he forces them to do that they don't like but that they enjoy at the same time. If I had to say only one thing that bothers and disappoints me, it is that the father still has a flabby and old body. I would more like to see Chris as a sexy dilf with a big ass and huge muscular tits. In my opinion, the scene of Chris and his son having sex would have been better this way. If it had been like that from the beginning I would be more excited, like Joe. But I only say this because of my preferences. I actually don't speak English, I'm reading your story thanks to the translator on the page. And this comment is translated from Spanish to English by Google. Sorry if something doesn't make sense, I just wanted to give my opinion. I hope you continue writing more of this erotic story.

5/16/24, 7:07 PM
@Morbius Dunkey It was never my intention to make Chris seem super overweight. I explain it a little more in the next chapter, which is processing right now. I hope everything translates well, I use a lot of sayings and phrases that hopefully translate correctly.
Anonymous
5/16/24, 2:32 PM
Can’t wait for more of this one 🤤 🤤 🤤
5/15/24, 11:22 AM
Fantastic story. Super hot. Can’t wait to read more.

5/16/24, 11:53 AM
@[Cracker](/user/show/10023984) Thanks, Cracker. Much appreciated.
5/12/24, 9:20 PM
Very exciting story. This is the first time reading any of your writings, but I'm hooked. Gotta go back and read the next chapter now. Thank you, Sir, for sharing with us. mikegay4u

5/16/24, 11:51 AM
@[mikegay4u](/user/show/451349) Glad you enjoyed it, boy.
5/12/24, 2:04 PM
So good!!!

5/16/24, 11:51 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Thanks boy.
4/7/24, 9:38 AM
Another fine piece of writing… you know how to put words and thoughts together in such an awesome way that makes my dick hard just anticipating what I’m going to read! Please please please SIR… keep writing more, don’t stop, I’m totally addicted

5/16/24, 11:50 AM
@[Frank1](/user/show/10000899) Thanks, Frank! I appreciate the compliments. Glad you're enjoying it.
Top+Bottom
5/16/24, 11:40 AM
"You would serve at my pleasure until I decide otherwise." Hottest line in this whole thing. Damn.
Fred
5/16/24, 10:17 AM
Very hot story, love the take down of the Alpha. Keep up the good work!

5/16/24, 11:25 AM
@Fred Thanks Fred! Love your new one as well.
5/15/24, 6:32 PM
This was stellar! I have a leather dom buddy that I know will enjoy this story 😆😏 Thanks for posting, Great Read!!

Anonymous
5/15/24, 6:40 PM
@[Mr Jack Off](/user/show/2164801) Would you want to see your leather buddy as the leather daddy in this story hehe

5/16/24, 11:24 AM
@[Mr Jack Off](/user/show/2164801) Thanks MJO! I appreciate the compliments.
Anonymous
5/11/24, 9:17 AM
hot!! I love your stories where a hot top stud gets taken down and turned into a slutty little pussy bitch. this one was super hot b/c most of it was on the takedown, and having Josh (the former boy) involved was awesome. I hope there is more to come and Josh gets to take over ownership of his former top daddy Mike, while jocktopper is away/busy. I did miss the set-up of how/where jocktopper meets mike and takes him down. in my perfect world, there would be the normal set up you go, and then the extended takedown like in this story. sorry if i'm being greedy. haha

5/11/24, 6:36 PM
@Anonymous Thanks buddy. I appreciate the comments.

Anonymous
5/12/24, 10:44 AM
@[JockTopper](/user/show/10015286) ok, now I feel really stupid!!! I went back to re-read this again, because it was so hot, and then I realized it's part 2 of your previous story taking down a leather daddy!!! hahaha. damn, now i feel dumb as hell. sorry for being a moron. :) ignore my comment above about missing the whole set up (that would be part 1, duh!!). thnx again for the awesome story and I hope you keep it going.

5/16/24, 11:22 AM
@Anonymous LOL! No worries man. I get it. Glad you enjoyed both.