So damn hot. Wish that was me

Intriguing premise 😏

I've been meaning to do a bit of longer commentary on this installment. First, I love having most of it from Dusk's point of view. I really like being inside his head and seeing how he thinks now, and what "realignment" means. Consider his interaction with DT-037. Midnight/Archie probably wouldn't have thought of anything but horror about DT-037 being enslaved, and probably would have never thought of using him sexually, given his inability to give true consent. Dusk has no qualms about wondering if Master might temporarily assign DS-037 to him for a bit of fun. In the fight at the beginning, Dusk can admire Morrigan's capabilities, but has no urge to assist the heroes, and dislikes the way the League has treated her. He's there for Master, period. He also thinks of Bonecrafter as surprisingly "sane and intelligent" even while acknowledging that he's a butcher in a lab coat. Then there's Dusk's interaction with Onyx later on. His reaction to the threat of being cut off from Master and the Network for a month is illuminating. He considers this possibility worse than any punishment he has previously experienced since he became a drone. Even his dismissal of his thought about Master's decor verging on gaudy is interesting - it's an Archie thought, not a Dusk thought, and therefore doesn't matter. And finally, there's his near panic at the idea that not all is well with Master - this undermines his sense of well-being and of Master as a god-like being. All in all we get a picture of a drone who may still be a person, but is very different from the person he was when he first found Master and before. In his thoughts about Horizon, Dusk also gives us a hint of how realignment works differently on different drones. He notes how much Horizon has changed from the man he recruited, and even Dusk finds Horizon's focus, devotion, and fanaticism in serving Master intense. However, he doesn't seem at all troubled by this; he merely takes note of it. The only part of this Interlude that isn't seen from Dusk's point of view is DT-X's meeting with the Mayor. There, we're inside DT-X's head, and this too is very interesting. His way of thinking is not too far from Dusk's, but he seems even more focused on Master and Master's plans and even less able to contemplate disobedience. Even in his head, he yields to Master to make decisions on how to proceed based on the sensory input he's getting. DT-X seems to be a drone whose conversion came more naturally to him than Dusk's. Plot wise, this interlude is heavy on exposition, but we learn a fair amount and get a lot of hints about what's to come. Jamie is even more important to Master than we thought, and his acquisition by Master is now imminent. Dusk will play a pivotal role in that, though it may be a lot harder than he was expecting. Master's broader plan involves a type of Drone he's calling "Defenders", but he needs the help of the city authorities to implement it, and doing so will at least take the League and the big corporate "Parents" of New Fairfax down a notch or two in the City's power structure (and not incidentally make Master a bigger player). Anyway, that's all I got for now, but I'd love to read what the rest of you have to say about what I've said here and what may be coming up.

Great story, would have liked a bit of a sex scene though. The characters felt very realised and not like thoughtless hollow puppets of the writer. Overall fantastic job, your writing has an ease that keeps you reading, nicely paced and moves smoothly from one scenario to the next. The story has a great tone and I do so love when a caged boy calls his master Sir. Five Stars, truly a pleasure to read.

Very. Very. Hot.

Any news on updates? for his story or any of your others?

I really enjoyed this one. I especially liked how you set it up using only dialogues. I’m a “sucker” for good fin-dom stories .👍

Really inventive. Pretty hot too.

Great story.