Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/20/24, 4:30 PM
Glad to see you back!
May 14, 2024
5/20/24, 3:46 PM
Nice little story.
May 14, 2024
5/20/24, 3:43 AM
Love a good findom story!

Fred
5/20/24, 4:21 AM
@[Praxidice](/user/show/1236261) Thanks!
Anonymous
5/16/24, 10:49 AM
I implore you, you genius writer, please don't stop writing this absolute masterpiece.:pray:

5/20/24, 12:44 AM
@Anonymous Hey, thanks for this - made my night! Just submitted Part Two, so it should be up in the next day or so. Hope ya enjoy!
5/19/24, 1:59 PM
I can’t believe I missed this when it came out! The descriptions of the dicks, the cum inflation, the sleazy hypersexual atmosphere… loved it.
5/19/24, 12:23 AM
Rubbrsome, I've been a big fan of your stories for a long time. One of my favorite hypno writers. The Male Order has a deeply dreamlike quality to it- an erotic nightmare. While I have my own qualms with AI art, I have to admit that the images you used in the story help contribute to the surreal, fluid tone of the story- male shapes flowing and warping in ways that are strange, but not unrecognizable. Bustard's generations capture a deeply erotic element of the transhuman, of the inhuman. My mind says no, but another part of me says "yes, yes, yes!"

5/19/24, 1:42 PM
@[ParadoxBear](/user/show/10002417) Thank you for the amazing compliment. When I first stumbled across BVSTARD's images, my mind was blown. I desperately wanted to incorporate his art into one of my stories. It was simply because I had never seen imagery (from film, TV, print, photo, or any type of media) that got close to what I was envisioning inside my mind. The way you described "male shapes flowing and warping in ways that are strange ..." is a great description of that scenarios that are happening inside my imagination. And BVSTARD's art is the closest I've seen that touches my imagination. So OF COURSE I had to contact him, get permission and write a story. It wasn't hard in writing. His imagery instantly got my ideas churning. And I was very pleased with the results. I'm so glad you succumbed and have that desire to say "yes, yes, yes!"
littledickslave@yahoo.com
5/18/24, 8:42 PM
Excellent story! So hot to see a man's cock shrink to become a boy's clit, while he accepts that he is totally owned and submits to and obeys his owner without reservation!

5/18/24, 9:51 PM
@littledickslave@yahoo.com Thank you, this is just the start of Callum’s story, we see him go from buff straight guy, massive cock to gay Twink Sub with a boy clit. I’m thoroughly enjoying writing this.
5/18/24, 12:34 AM
Thanks for the chapter, I would like to see how Callum’s ex-girlfriend is kidnapped and turned into a guy) it would be very interesting to read about her father as well.

5/18/24, 7:03 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) The Ex-girlfriend will make an appearance again as Callum’s story continues.
5/18/24, 1:08 PM
WOW! The references to all the smells in the room... they brought me deeply into the moment. THANK YOU. THis is beautifully written and so exciting to me. I love your writing and this story and feel so connected to Carlos. He is my man!
May 18, 2024
5/18/24, 6:53 AM
As great as ever.